High unemployment, the endless economic downturn, pay cuts, homes under water, foreclosures. It’s hardly the stuff of poetry.
Nevertheless, imposing the discipline of the ancient Japanese poetry form haiku on our economic troubles can be somewhat therapeutic. It allows us to be creative but also to impose some control on a situation that often seems beyond our control.
So we asked readers to riff on the economy and send us their thoughts in haiku form — three lines of five, seven and five syllables in that order.
Back in 2009 we asked readers to send in their recession haiku. Scores responded.
This time around I guess we could call the responses recovering-economy haiku — albeit there hasn’t been much recovery for some readers. Others looked on the brighter side: There’s more to life than money, and, of course, we still have those swaying palm trees.
But the recovery is still sluggish. While the luxury condo towers have begun to fill up, many people are still singing the housing collapse blues. And “foraging for work,’’ as one reader puts it, is still way too common.
Here’s a sampling of the little gems our readers have shared:
Finding jobs are scarce,
But just what you need -- no more.
There is always hope.
Jacqueline Hardy, Aventura
Now I’m retired
From Dade County Public Schools
Less income — more LIFE!
Shelley Kolber, West Kendall
Bayfront with wide views;
No mortgage or fees, just costs:
Life under the bridge.
C. Harty, Miami
Oh, we had it all.
But, remembering the past
is consolation.
Mary Lamont, Miami
Laid off three years since,
Heart wrenching experience,
Thoughts haunt me again.
Mary Giffrow
Nothing from China!
Angry shoppers now demand.
Labels are removed.
Allison Neat, Key Largo
Greece needs a bailout
Italy hangs on the ropes
Will the Dow Jones fall?
Peg Grey, West Park, Florida
Children now married
return to parents with hope
recovery soon
Keith Connor, Cutler Bay
Wall Streeters rejoice
Bonuses flowing again
Others drown in debt
Mike Lynch, Pensacola
Frustrating, futile
foraging for work foretells
a fruitless future.
E.S.Friedman, Miami
Nothing from China!
Angry shoppers now demand.
Labels are removed.
Allison Neat, Key Largo Florida
A silent machine
In shuttered factory doors
Sits, untouched by hands.
KT Cohen, Miami
As huddled masses
become more tired and poor
Freedom gasps for air.
Jane Paglino, North Miami Beach
Unemployment is
a job in itself. We work
to get rejection.
Donna Weaver, Miami
My stomach cries help
for bread, hot soup or cold drink
I surrender pride.
Dr. Don Strachan, Miami
Keep your mind active.
Economic haiku themes
are just what we need.
Al Sasiadek, Miami
They, getting richer.
Me, wondering how to pay
this month’s mortgage (Sigh)
Ellen Geyer, Miami Beach
My mortgage, my home
A slippery submarine,
Sinks in a sea of red
Pierre Dumaine, Miami
Greece on sliding slope.
The world extends helping hand
or desperate grasp.
Dan Aber, Fort Lauderdale
Lo, empty condos
still scrape the sexy skyline
the Miami Way.
Dylan Barmmer
What is middle class?
Does that mean middle income?
Can you define it?
Louise Sendlein, Key Largo
Love and health are wealth
Money doesn’t buy you joy
Live in gratitude
Spring D. Strong, Aventura
Las Vegas gamblers here
Sending message – Jobs! Jobs! Jobs!
Poker face sagging.
Marcia Reisman, Coral Gables
Market’s up - heads high!
Sword of Damocles looms large
Greece decides world’s fate?
Kathy D. Doran, Miami Beach
A tent-full plaza
recalls tear-gas days of old youth
stirs this old man’s soul
Bruce Epperson, Hollywood
Homeless sleep at night
on streets near Adrienne Arsht.
A sign of the times.
Peg Grey, West Park
So many burglars!
Fancy houses are out there.
Are we very poor?
Vincent Wong, Miami



















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